12 DAYS OF DATA 2021, DAY 8: PRESS RELEASE MOST USED WORDS

12 Days of Data 2021, Day 8: Press Release (Over)used Words

Introduction

Welcome to the 12 Days of Data 2021 Edition, our look back at the data that made marketing in 2021. We’re looking at the year that was (and oh, what a year it was… again…) from an analytics perspective to see what insights we can take into the next year. Sit up, get your coffee ready, and let’s celebrate some data and look forward to the year ahead.

Most Used Words in Press Releases

On the eighth day of the 12 Days of Data, we dig into the language of the press release, or news release. Thanks to the Google News database and the GDELT Project, we are able to read all the press releases in 2021.

One of our favorite exercises from years past was to look at words in releases that tended to be used a little too much, from old corporate stand-bys like “synergy” to the rash of expressions like how excited or proud or pleased we are about some piece of news.

Why do these terms matter? Because an awful lot of the time, when words and phrases are used by everyone, they lose distinctiveness. We end up sounding like every other brand or company. Thus, to sound a little different, we should be using different words.

Let’s take a look at the words of 2021. We dug into 115,099 press releases longer than 5 sentences published this year to find this data:

Most Overused Words in Press Releases

What we see at a top level is relatively little lexical diversity. Lexical diversity means a large variety of words used; the more lexical diversity any given document has, the more unique words it uses. In this case, out of 23 million words, we have a relatively small selection of unique words:

  • 38,975 distinct nouns
  • 12,552 distinct verbs
  • 8,411 distinct adjectives
  • 1,991 distinct adverbs

When we look at the words as a whole, obviously most are dominated by nouns:

Top words of 2021 in press releases

  1. Company: 104,082 uses
  2. News: 104,007 uses
  3. Information: 97,522 uses
  4. Business: 87,747 uses
  5. Services: 76,978 uses

Where things get interesting is when we look at the different parts of speech, such as adjectives:

Top Adjectives in press releases 2021

Adjectives are important because they’re descriptors, they’re differentiators in speech. When we look at the list of adjectives most used, we see familiar saws like leading, comprehensive, strategic, etc. in the list.

Key Takeaway

As our colleague Jay Baer says, “Same is lame.” When you say, “We are the first solutions-oriented partner focus on innovation as the largest, best leading platform for customer exerience now and in the future”, you’re not really saying anything – at least not anything that can’t also be claimed by a thousand other companies.

Presumably, if you’re publishing a news release, you have actual news. There’s nothing new at all in these overused words, and using them diminishes any perception of newness about your announcement. Instead, your news comes across as an also-ran, a competitor, perhaps even a knock-off or copycat.

Why do we do this to ourselves? Two reasons. First, while such language is incredibly repetitive, it’s also perceived as safe. No one will object to phrases like leading and strategic, nor will anyone find objection in discussing industry-leading services or your future-proof platform. Compare that with a brand taking controversial points of view and perspective; the trite jargon is seen as the ultimate safe choice (even if it causes an audience to immediately ignore you).

Second, many companies, especially larger ones, employ consultants and agencies to handle media relations. Anyone who’s worked for any significant period of time at a public relations agency knows that tasks like press release writing are typically delegated to the most junior, lowest-paid staff members who copy and paste from templates or previous releases to save time. The net effect is that every release sounds like boilerplate because it’s all sourced from the same boilerplate language, with only the company name and CEO quotes changed from release to release.

What’s the solution? Better writing. At the very least, consider using a free service like Related Words to try finding synonyms for the most frequent offenders, like the top ten list above. Ideally, create something so remarkable, so newsworthy that customers do the talking for you, and then you’re not using jargon, but real words from real people.

Methodology

Trust Insights used Google’s GDELT news service to extract 118,813 news releases published in 2021 in the English language. Releases were filtered to require a minimum length of 5 sentences, leaving 115,099 from the initial extract. The timeframe of the study is January 1, 2021 to December 16, 2021. The date of extraction is December 16, 2021. Trust Insights is the sole sponsor of the study and neither gave nor received compensation for data used, beyond applicable service fees to software vendors, and declares no competing interests.

Read the 12 Days of Data 2021 Series

  1. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 1: Instagram for Brands
  2. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 2: Instagram for Influencers
  3. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 3: Instagram Media Types
  4. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 4: Tiktok Trending Videos
  5. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 5: TikTok Marketing Topic Deep Dive
  6. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 6: SEO Page Decay Statistics
  7. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 7: Press Release Statistics
  8. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 8: Press Release (Over)used Words
  9. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 9: 2022 Marketing Campaign Forecast
  10. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 10: Top News and Web Content
  11. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 11: Content Republishing
  12. 12 Days of Data 2021, Day 12: Slack and Discord

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